Review of Dropped Pass by Elaine Ashford

Dropped Pass (Gay New Adult Romance Novella) (A Hockey Pros Romance)Dropped Pass (Gay New Adult Romance Novella) by Elaine Ashford

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

2,5-3 stars

Really strong start, and good story idea. Unfortunately its lack of length worked against it. Horribly rushed and I never understood how Mike went from scared shitless of his own feelings to being openly in Love with Nils.
Also, the sex was just a tad too easy for a guy who apparently had no idea what two guys might do together, according to his own thoughts in the beginning of the story.

A few, but very annoying editing errors, where names changed in the midlle of conversations. Mike is having a conversation with Greg, they are the only two in the room, but Caleb reacts on the conversation? Huh?

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