Review of A Kinky Orgasm by Amanda Young

A Kinky Orgasm (Bottom's Up #1)A Kinky Orgasm by Amanda Young

My rating: 1 of 5 stars

This was… odd? It starts out well enough, with a bit of back story on how Briar – one of our MCs – come to own an manage the bar he is in and a small snippet of information about the other MC – who enters the bar at closing time – being the captain of the football team, when they were in high school.

This information however, turns out to be completely superfluous to the story, as it then turns out to be the script of a porn video I once watched, at least I am pretty sure I have… Do you know it: Man walks into empty bar, without further ado the bartender is sucking him off, and then they fuck? Yeah, pretty sure I have seen it.

Then we skip to 6 months later, where they have bought a house and are on their way to the HEA??? What the hay? Sorry, author, but you kind of skipped the interesting parts here: the meet, the getting to know one another, the building of the relationship…

It’s short and free though. But didn’t work for me.

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