Review of Pet Girl by Sara Tyr

Pet GirlPet Girl by Sara Tyr

My rating: 2 of 5 stars

What this book needs most of all is an editor! I do not believe there was one single sentence that didn’t have some kind of issue: misspelling, wrong words used, missing words, tense changing, pov changing in the middle of a paragraph, etc. etc.

Other than that, good idea, but poorly executed. Supposedly slave fic, but apparently Jack has a magic dick so Lucy loves all the sex. Also the blurb leads you to believe that this is a book about her life with her new owner, at least that was what I was expecting, but it is not. It’s a book about the first day and the supposed ‘taming’ or ‘breaking’ of her – which is not actually that, due to ‘the magic dick’…. Maybe there is a sequel?

Disappointing. 1,5-2 stars

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